Friday, December 09, 2005
Man, its freezin outside.So cold, we have a base for our rink. Me and dad have been working on it lately.Other than the cold, we have been o k. I have just mostly been inside playing THUG 2 (Tony Hawk's underground 2) I borrowed it from a friend of mine.Christmas is coming and i'm excited, I don't know why.My schoolwork is fine, I'll be finishing everything by about December 20.On the 21 we are going to Williams lake for Christmas and dentist appointments.Well, I guess thats everything, Bye Bye
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Since I am a teacher Bax, I'm going to correct your English. You said "me and dad...." There is a very easy way to correct most of these kinds of mistakes...just leave out the other person(in this case-dad) and then ask yourself...would you say "me worked on the rink..." or would you say "I worked on the rink..."(I think its then quite obvious that the second choice sounds much "gooder".(another thing...put the other person(dad) beffore yours)
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